Narrative Writing Success Criteria
Characters:
A key problem exists in the story. This may be:
Problem develops through the body of the story and becomes the main focus of the story (Climax). Problem may be solved in a positive or negative way. WALT: Plan and write a NARRATIVE. Focus on:
Guidelines: Around 350 words Planning: 1 session- Use an A 4 sheet of paper and do a mind map. Writing: 5-6 sessions Sentence types: 0. The very short sentence.
Mrs Menary’s Example Characters: A kind hearted, caring teacher, with short gray hair, softly wrinkled skin, and twinkly sparkling eyes. A nine year old boy who has just shifted to a new school. He has tousled mousy coloured hair, a pinched pale face and shabby clothes. Setting: Cashall School in the middle of Christchurch city. It is set on a hillside above the city and has a lot of older buildings, concrete and not much green grass. Problem: The young boy is missing his old school, has no friends and is being bullied. Changing Schools James hated school. When his mother came to wake him in the morning, he hid under the blankets and pretended not to hear. He feigned sickness, complaining of a sore stomach or a headache. Surprisingly, as soon as the school bus had gone by, James recovered and jumped out of bed with glee! Unfortunately….. Success Criteria Checklist (tick off what you have achieved)
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WALT To write a conservation report about a topic we are passionate about.
Success Criteria for a report:
Example of a report: Orangutans Introduction Orangutans are the only great apes of Asia, and are found in Southeast Asia on the islands of Borneo and Sumatra. They are remarkably similar to humans in physical features and behavior. They are becoming severely endangered and are in danger of extinction. There used to be thousands of wild orangutans but now it is estimated that there are less than half this number living in the wild. Orangutan Behaviour Orangutans travel around in the treetops of the rainforest. Each night they make a new nest to sleep in. Why they are becoming endangered. Orangutans live in rainforests which are being destroyed by fires which are lit by people to deliberately burn down the forest to grow palm oil. They are losing their natural habitat and there are very few still living in the wild. Baby orangutans used to be often taken from their mothers and sold as pets. This is not happening as much now but it does still happen. Palm Oil Palm oil is found in about half of the products in our grocery stores. It is used in a wide range of products for example it is used in some brands of snack bars and shampoo. What Can Be Done to Save the Orangutan? We can avoid buying products with palm oil in them. We need to read the ingredients carefully on grocery items. For example Bluebird chips have palm oil. Avoid these and buy other brands with no palm oil. If enough people stopped buying these products it would send a message to manufacturers to stop using palm oil in their products and then there would be no demand for palm oil so rainforests would stop being destroyed. Then the orangutan would have some habitat to continue living in the wild. Room 8 - Te Puawai: Speech
Writing Guide 2018 You are to write a speech on a topic that you are an expert on, or are passionate about.
Tips that will help write a FANTASTIC speech! This first tip may be the hardest to relate to: This speech isn’t about you, it is about your audience! In writing a speech, you have two objectives: Making a good impression and leaving your audience with two or three ideas to take home. The rest is just entertainment. How can you make those crucial points? Consider these strategies: 1) Be Memorable: Sounds easy in theory. Of course, it takes discipline and imagination to pull it off. Many times, an audience may only remember a single line. Metaphors…Analogies…Surprise…Axioms. They all work. You just need to build up to them…and place them in the best spot (preferably near the end). 2) Have a Structure: Think back on a terrible speech. What caused you to lose interest? Chances are, the speaker veered off the topic Remove anything that’s extraneous, contradictory, or confusing. Remember: If it doesn’t help you get your core message across, drop it. 3) Don’t Waste the Opening: Too often, speakers waste the time when their audience is most receptive: The opening. Sure, speakers have people to thank. Some probably need time to get comfortable on stage. In the meantime, the audience silently suffers. When you write, come out swinging. Share an interesting fact or statistic. Tell a humorous story related to your big idea. Open with a question – and have your audience raise their hands. Get your listeners engaged early. 4) Strike the Right Tone: Who is my audience? Why are they here? And what do they want? Those are questions you must answer before you even touch the keyboard. Writing a speech involves meeting the expectations of others, whether it’s to inform, motivate, entertain, or even challenge. To do this, you must adopt the right tone. Look at your message. Does it fit with the spirit of the event? Will it draw out the best in people? Here’s a bit of advice: If you’re speaking in a professional setting, focus on being upbeat and uplifting. 5) Humanize Yourself: You and your message are one-and-the-same. If your audience doesn’t buy into you, they’ll resist your message too. It’s that simple. No doubt, your body language and delivery will leave the biggest impression. Still, there are ways you can use words to connect. Crack a one liner about your nervousness; everyone can relate to being nervous about public speaking. Share a story about yourself, provided it relates to (or transitions to) your points. Throw in references to your family, to reflect you’re trustworthy. And write like you’re having a casual conversation with a friend. You’re not preaching or selling. You’re just being you. On stage, you can be you at your best. 6) Repeat Yourself: Some audience members may get annoyed when you repeat yourself. But don’t worry how they feel today. Concern yourself with this question: What will they remember six months from now? 7) Use Transitions: Sometimes, audiences won’t recognize what’s important. That’s why you use transitional phrases to signal intent. For example, take a rhetorical question like “What does this mean” – and follow it with a pause. Silence gets attention – and this tactic creates anticipation (along with awakening those who’ve drifted off). Similarly, a phrase like “So here’s the lesson” also captures an audience’s interest. It alerts them that something important is about to be shared. Even if they weren’t paying attention before, they can tune in now and catch up. 8) End Strong: The fact is, your ending is what your audience will remember. So recap your biggest takeaway. Tie everything together. Share a success story. Make a call to action. Don’t hold anything back. Your ending is what audience will ultimately talk about when they head out the door. 10) Keep it Short: What is the worst sin of public speaking? It’s trying to do too much! Your audience’s attention will naturally wane after a few minutes. They have other places to be – and don’t want to be held hostage. And the longer you stay on stage, the more likely you are to stray and make mistakes. So make your points and sit down. Never forget: This is their time, not yours. Three more tips:
WALT Write an introduction that hooks your audience. Purpose:
Success Criteria:
Which of these introductions grabs the audience’s attention more effectively? Hi, I am Alex and I am the biggest expert on Pokemon. I know so much about the game, and there is no-one at school who knows more than I do. I am going to tell you lots of facts about Pokemon. Or: Hi everyone, I am Alex de Jong, from Te Korari at Collingwood Area School. In just three minutes time, you are going to find out all you need to know to become a Pokemon Master. Together, we will find out where to get cards, how to build a winning deck, and a few of the things you need to know to get started on your Pokemon adventures. WALT Structure the body of our speech Purpose:
Success Criteria:
Example: Tokyo (Libby’s topic) Subtopics:
WALT Write specific, relevant and interesting detail about each topic. Purpose:
Success Criteria:
Example: Tokyo has the widest choice of places to eat out of all of the cities in the world. There are around 160,000 restaurants, bars and street food outlets in the city. This is four times as many places to eat as Paris. In Tokyo you can easily find traditional Japanese dishes, modern Japanese food, as well as popular western foods. You can spend about ¥200 for a bowl of soba or udon noodles: right up to more than 40,000 Yen for a full 14 course traditional Japanese dinner served by professional itamae (Chefs) in one of Japan’s best restaurants. WALT Write a conclusion for your speech
Argument Writing
This week in Te Puawai the class have been writing lots of arguments: Should we be allowed cell phones at school? Should we be allowed to chew gum at school? Should we have to go to bed at a certain time? Or an argument of their own choice. Graphic Novel Writing
Next week we begin planning our graphic novel writing. We will need to focus on:
Guidelines: Around 10-20 boxes that will fit on an A3 sheet of paper. Planning: 2 sessions. Drafting of writing: 5 sessions. Editing and improving: 2 sessions. Publishing and illustrating: 3-4 sessions. Graphic Novel Writing Success Criteria: Characters:
A key problem exists in the story. This may be:
Problem develops through the body of the story and becomes the main focus of the story (Climax). Problem may be solved in a positive or negative way.
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